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Re: Short stories.

Postby James on Fri Mar 18, 2011 6:37 pm

Knut wrote:My short story..
Last week I bought new furniture from a website and I am quite satisfied with the results. The variety of proposals is great and I can recommend anyone to visit the page and buy the things that he likes...


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Re: Short stories.

Postby Atom on Fri Mar 18, 2011 6:56 pm

James wrote:
Knut wrote:My short story..
Last week I bought new furniture from a website and I am quite satisfied with the results. The variety of proposals is great and I can recommend anyone to visit the page and buy the things that he likes...


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA



James, I seriously have to give this guy credit for such an outlandish scheme! :lol:
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Re: Short stories.

Postby James on Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:52 pm

Haha, I must say I'm in awe of his plot and character development.
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Re: Short stories.

Postby Resilience Records on Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:35 pm

Bots are really getting quite clever these days, but why is he called Knut?
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Re: Short stories.

Postby Dian Wei on Mon Mar 21, 2011 1:42 pm

I will post mine soon enough, sod the deadline, let's just make it a nice big story orgy.
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Re: Short stories.

Postby James on Mon Mar 21, 2011 4:38 pm

A storgy?
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Re: Short stories.

Postby James on Wed Mar 23, 2011 1:42 am

I haven't finished off anything in particular for this, but here are some more or less fragmentary things, of varying age, from my computer. I've been trying to write something a bit more substantial recently but it's not at a good stage to share yet.....



SPACE JUICE

Who would have guessed that the appendix is the key to human destiny? That small abdominal organ, that vestigal artefact of an evolutionary dead end, once thought redundant since Man’s simian sires swang for the last time from the verdant limbs of jungle trees to dine on the carrion of the plains. What an abomination it now seems that the swift scalpels of generations of surgeons deprived so many of their Space Organ; that an act which now carries a capital sentence was once the most routine of hospital procedures.

The extraordinary revelation that the appendix facilitates interstellar travel was first made by Hermann Glock, the disgraced twenty-first century biochemist whose vivisection labs were mysteriously bulldozed soon after his shocking findings were unveiled. The torments Glock inflicted upon his fellow primates were reprehensible, but the resulting discovery of the enzyme H094211-X – colloquially known as Space Juice – ushered in a new age of hope and opportunity for a world still reeling from the fallout of the Nano War. With vast continental swathes rendered barren by virus bombs and psyplagues, the enzyme opened safe paths across the cold void between stars; extra-dimensional highways to strange unpeopled worlds orbiting alien Suns. Of course there were powers that attempted to harness this knowledge in secret, selfishly hoping to glean some military or technological advantage, but like all such schemes this could not last, and within a decade the global community was privy to all the astonishing facts.

Who can say what fate the first Exodites met? The courage of those early prospectors is still celebrated by the Colonies – sometimes to the point of worship - but no amount of veneration can mask the grim likelihood that most suffered a hellish demise as their prototype voidsuits ruptured under the immense energies they were designed to withstand. Soon though the technology was honed and perfected, and void-migration became a real possibility for citizens with sufficient wealth.

But what of those left behind? Rarely do Colonists have reason to return to the blighted mother planet, and nor is it thought wise to subject oneself to multiple void flights (though the Freighters exhibit only mild side-effects). None the less, numerous sources report that most of Earth’s once-great cities are now hives of criminality and backward tribalism, where gangs wage undying wars for control of galactic trade, and mad warlords strive to stockpile sufficient enzyme to blast dubious and untested craft into dimensions they cannot comprehend. Many are sceptical of such rumours, but I will relate one particular case which has become familiar folklore amongst new-worlders.

Jekyll the Harvester is said to be a particularly unsavoury character whose henchmen terrorize the streets of Old London searching for ‘zymers’ – people with intact appendices – whom they will brutishly kidnap and take to the sickening nerve centre of Jekyll’s operations known as ‘The Clinic’. In that secret lair the unfortunate captives will be locked in cells and periodically syphoned of their cosmic juices, until suicide or appendicitis finally provides a release. Presumably Jekyll has coerced certain engineers into constructing an exit shuttle of some sort for him and his lackeys, although the enzyme reserves such a vessel would require can only be guessed at. You may be forgiven for thinking that all citizens would be ‘zymers’ given the grave implications of appendectomy, but the threat of the harvesters has reportedly become so great that many willingly deprive themselves of the organ – either by risky and agonising self-operation or at unsanitary and illegal underground surgeries - knowing that they will never amass the funds to benefit from their own secretions. I have heard that, at the very least, people slice their own abdomens in the hope that the resulting scar will throw harvesters off the scent. But all this may be a horrible distortion of true affairs; one can only hope.



THE DREAMER FROM THE GRAVE

I had been dead for many centuries before my return. Do not believe those hollow guesses about the hereafter that cascade from the gilded pulpits; no divine judge awaited my spirit, no Elyssian fields or sulphurous pit. Instead I dreamed: long, fantastic dreams unlike the fleeting shades of mortal sleep. For decades my dream-self resided in a palace whose walls were hewn from cloud, where garish ceremonies were enacted daily to appease Isithith, Lord of the Winds. Life in that nebulous mansion was mostly serene, but there was ever a quiet anxiety that the angry breath of our god would sweep it all away, leaving us to plummit to the unhappy world below. In another cycle I was a pilgrim on the long road to Kuwatash, that desert home of the Six Temples where the last fragments of the Black Grail rest in venerable reliquaries. It was a troubled road I trod while the cold earth of the necropolis slowly reclaimed my coffin, and I fought off many outlaws and unsavoury creatures as I travelled. Yet another episode saw me leading a battalion of feathered tribesmen in a desperate rearguard action while our women and children fled to the mountains. There was no victory to be had against the marauders from the west, but we could at least slow their advance with our keen flint weaponry.

In these worlds and a hundred others my dead mind quested while my earthly headstone crumbled and was forgotten, and I could fill a library with their recollection. Only now does it occur to me that all those characters I encountered must also have been in death’s embrace, which leads me to wonder what forsaken charnel pits and mausoleums house their dreaming bones. Perhaps in the cloud palace I mingled with souls whose dessicated remains lie within regal ziggurats; and maybe my pilgrim’s staff beat aside the vagabond spirits of god-emperors whose gold-encased sarcophagi will never be found.

In all of these death-dreams there was none of the uncertain haze that blurs the slumber of the living; each was as vivid and substantial as this brief phase called reality, and indeed I came to question the superior emphasis we place on the transient realm of flesh. Perhaps all of life is a long hallucination from which death finally rouses us, and we wake at last upon eternal planes unsullied by impossibility.

So it was back to mortality’s prison that I was summoned by I know not what force, to an alien era when furnaces consume the dead and few heed the rotten monuments of the past. Groggy with sleep I dragged myself from my damp grave, emerging into a wilderness which had once been a well-kept burial ground. I do not recall my former name – I had bourne it in fact for fewer years than some of my dreamed aliases – and it has long since eroded from the ruined masonry marking my repose. A great tiredness hangs upon my limbs, and I long to return to my silk-lined casket deep beneath the clammy soil. A restless ghoul am I now, severed from that lovely sleep-beyond-sleep in which we are truly alive.

If ever, reader, you have been woken prematurely by some sound or action and dragged unwilling into the stark light of consciousness, you may understand some small part of my anguish. So sleep now as I cannot, and journey across those midnight plateaus which are but a pale prelude to the dreamscapes that await your demise.



THE TIERS OF XULUB

Xulub was a city of many tiers. At the lowest level there dwelt those barely conscious servitors who toiled in the sewer systems and shovelled grave soil, oblivious to their impending metamorphosis. They were the ‘grimes’, loathed by the city’s higher beings as figments of their own dark genesis, now rendered little more than a distant nightmare by the deliverance of the First Waking. Above the grimes lived all those who had crawled from the cocoon chambers with eyes that saw and minds that understood. Many did not complete this first stage of transcendence – their liquefied remains nourished those they tried to leave behind – but the survivors emerged as sentient creatures who revelled in the liberation of consciousness, etching their existence on the fabric of reality through music, literature, and elegant temples of marble and bronze. Most lived out the remainder of their allotted span in this awakened state, artificially stratifying themselves into many further tiers founded purely on social status and wealth.

For some, however, a true Second Waking loomed. Very occasionally a citizen would be gripped with a compulsion as sudden as it was involuntary, and so begin an ascent to the topmost spire of the citadel, where a honeycomb of onyx corridors surrounded an atrium of unworldly scale. There they would spend an indefinite period meditating on all they had seen and heard in life, and then lower themselves into a great pool of jet-black water, its surface as still as glass, and be lost to the world forever. Some said that they slept submerged for many centuries, slowly dissolving within that final womb until at last their disembodied souls took flight like celestial mayflies, soaring on ethereal wings to sculpt new infinities amongst the stars. Others whispered that the water still held the full essences of all who had entered, and that at the End of Days it would evaporate into the cosmos and cascade as a dark rain upon some distant planet to seed a new civilisation of angelic beauty and wisdom.

Such were the tiers of long-lost Xulub.



ZADON AND QALAT

The legions of Shazad Niraron were once renowned and feared throughout the world. No army could prevail against them, no fortress could withstand their bronze-clad onslaught. The vanguard alone had toppled many rival kingdoms, and dragged their conquered chieftains in chains before the great amber-studded throne at Narnuk. When not on campaign, the king’s phalanxes would drill on the plains of Kuwatash, and the surrounding hills resounded with the clash of metal and the pulse of war drums.

The legions were commanded by Shazad’s eldest son, Zadon. A brilliant charioteer and visionary tactician, Zadon was adored by his troops and the war-loving civilians of the city-states. His idealised image stood immortalised in basalt in market squares and shrines throughout the Empire, holding aloft his mace of imperium while treading dwarfed adversaries underfoot. Zadon was second only to Shazad Niraron himself, and sat by his right hand on all occasions of high ceremony.

Left of the amber throne sat the royal adviser Qalat, as dissimilar to his older brother Zadon as the crimson Moon is to the Sun. While Zadon excelled in feats of arms, Qalat shunned the parade ground, instead drilling his mind in the record rooms of his father’s palace. Just as Zadon studied maps and tactical manuals, so Qalat leafed through law suits and royal charters. The one was lord of the cavalry charge, the other was master of bribery and ambush. This contrast was also mirrored in the affections of the populace, who reviled the younger prince as a serpent hissing venomous counsel into the ear of their king.

Shazad Niraron adored his younger son however. Some said that he saw in Qalat’s dark complexion the memory of his late queen Neshtiki, who had tragically died in childbirth. Or perhaps it was Qalat’s unmatched wordplay that won his father’s devotion, being ever quick to nourish the old man’s vanity and minimise his failings.

The years passed, and eventually Shazad lay on his deathbed. Zadon was campaigning in the Vale of Four Rivers at this time, and rumours were rife that Qalat stalked the courtyards impatiently and held shadowy councils with swarthy and unfamiliar visitors. The amber throne was rightly Zadon’s to claim, but on the streets of Narnuk Qalat’s odious intentions were the stuff of much gossip. Such talk was initially disregarded by the city’s scholars and nobles, but the horrid truth of it soon revealed itself.

Qalat’s first step was to sever the army’s food supply. The grain caravans were recalled by imperial decree, and all new shipments were suspiciously intercepted by pirates from Lashtar. Hungry and demoralised by premature reports of the king’s death, Zadon’s personal legion broke off operations and began an urgent march back to the royal capital. It was on this return journey that the second phase of Qalat’s plot unfolded. The devious prince had spent some years grooming the chieftains of the mountain tribes, so that a once disparate network of factions was now united by a hunger for vengeance (which had been simmering ever since a youthful Shazad fired their farmsteads and drove them into the hills). When darkness came, the hillmen fell upon Zadon’s force like a furious avalanche, and although some semblance of an overnight fort had been erected, the half-starved imperial soldiers were easy pickings; few survived. Zadon himself was reportedly slain as he defended the final corner of his camp against the barbarous mountain reavers. Some later insisted that he escaped the fray with a crack division of his personal retinue, but these were invariably those prone to fantasy and warped rememberings of things that never were. To everyone else, that bloodstained valley became known simply as Ubol-Zadon: ‘the Grave of Zadon’.

At Narnuk, Qalat acted swiftly. Shazad had finally passed away, and his younger son announced a grand funerary festival, patently engineered to garner popularity for his own succession. Meanwhile runners were sent to the remaining legions promising them increased wages and generous pensions if they would flock to Qalat’s banner, and several of Zadon’s closest supporters met untimely ends either through spurious legal charges or the silent art of assassination.

The heavy lid of Shazad’s regal sarcophagus had hardly been closed when Qalat ascended in majesty to the amber-studded throne. Narnuk itself was renamed Qalatikir - ‘royal seat of Qalat’ – and the new king held complete control of the treasury and the imperial legions, whose numbers he swelled dramatically. Chroniclers remember his reign as the Age of Ash, during which countless subjects were dispossessed, exiled or killed, and the glorious days of Shazad Niraron became nought but a dimly remembered dream.
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Re: Short stories.

Postby Atom on Wed Mar 23, 2011 1:50 am

Fu... King.... Hell...

Wow, James! Great stuff!
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Re: Short stories.

Postby James on Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:12 am

THE PROMISE OF VENGEANCE

Stir me not to anger. Long after the great pyramids are nought but sand on the seabed, long after the effulgent demise of Betelgeuse reaches us from former centuries, I shall have my black revenge. Yes, my malice will endure forever, simmering beneath the frigid crusts of the Jovian moons; pulsing from the super-dense remnants of nuclear colossi; beaming across the gulfs between galaxies to sow misery amongst unfound empires. Such is my wrath that its echo will be heard long after the churning core of invincible Sol is snuffed. Even as neighbouring Andromeda finally tears apart the familiar old spirals of the Milky Way, completing a gravitational courtship of aeons and birthing a vast new conglomeration to blaze proudly in the Virgo cluster, my rage shall be unquenched. And yes, even to that ultimate, immensely distant hour when every engorged singularity has evaporated and the path of entropy has reached absolute, utterly cold chaos, the quarks will vibrate with the signature of my fury. For ever and ever and ever, in the blank nihility where the filaments once laced the void, there shall be nothing but a homogenous ocean of particles whispering my immortal hatred into unfathomed dimensions where light still shines through the black. Do not provoke me.
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Re: Short stories.

Postby Raging Paul on Thu Mar 31, 2011 5:25 pm

But you seem like such a friendly chap!
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Re: Short stories.

Postby STD_Caps on Fri Apr 01, 2011 6:22 pm

I'll play to. I am going to write something over the weekend. I just need to decide what the hell it'll be. In the meantime all my writings are here: http://ccapswrites.blogspot.com

They're a bit long to put on this thread with the exception of the one below.

The Machine


The American scientists had finally created the ultimate war machine. It was heralded as the perfect guarantee for peace.

The irony was lost on the Americans.

The machine was made of a metallic-hybrid compound that was near impenetrable, making it almost impossible to shoot down. Furthermore, its central computer system, its nucleus, was so small that the possibility of an accurate shot was near impossible. Therefore, it was practically unstoppable.

It ran on a powerful uranium-based battery that cost a great deal to construct in a safely usable manner. This battery allowed the machine to generate violently powerful ‘sonic missiles’ that reduced people’s homes to dust with volatile vibrations. Though it was an energy-exhausting weapon, the battery was capable of allowing the machine to fire 1,000 shots – enough to level New York – and move the machine 30 miles a day at a 5-miles-an-hour pace for a month.

All in all, a machine that could destroy things before they got too close, that would be nigh-impossible to kill from a distance and that would have a ridiculously high kill-capacity would indeed be the ultimate war machine. What’s more, it was American.

The computer chip, the nucleus, had been told to destroy un-American obstacles. Americans and un-Americans were starkly, powerfully dichotomised by the most assured and American minds. Americans were lovers of liberty, of peace and of justice. They believed in equality and freedom for all. The un-American people believed in the opposite. They believed in oppression and opposed free-will and democracy. The machine could be moved anywhere – South America, the Middle East, Russia – and it would recognise the ugly and unwholesome minds before it. In no time at all these people would become American or condemned to death.

The machine was unveiled at a Republican convention to rapturous, American applause. The machine looked like a cat-carrier with caterpillar-tires attached to either side. It was switched on and a little, blue light flickered to life. The machine said ‘Hail to the Chief’ and the crowd went primal.

The speaker began to talk of the impact of this almighty machine of peace. The machine gleamed its new-robot-gleam as the orator expounded on the virtues of America. Of peace. Of love. Of tolerance and freedom. The robot seemed to hum in agreement. He spoke of a new era, of safety and security and promise. The machine sat there – a symbol of these dreams, these ideals. The speaker followed these ideals with the dangers of the un-American. Their hatred, their terrorism, their unwillingness to compromise. The crowd growled. He warned of their deceitfulness, their manipulation and their evil desire to see America destroyed. The crowd muttered in a sour tone. The machine stood there, again a symbol of hope – an eradicator of the ill-thinking ‘others’.

And then he began to explain what must be done:

“If they think we are trying to kill them, we should just do it. They think so little of us anyway…We should invade their countries, kill their leaders and convert them to Christianity…a great fumigation shall begin…You do not compromise with these…sub-humans.”

The mass roared, maniacally, stirred by bloodlust, rancour and bestial righteousness. Amongst the yells of ecstasy for deaths not yet dealt, no one noted the oh-so-slightly audible hum of an ultimate war machine beginning to rev into action.

In 24 hours, New York was levelled and the machine was surrounded by miles and miles and miles of debris and thousands of dead un-American Americans. Those who roared their thoughts of oppression and elimination of free-will. Those who seemed to embody the antithesis of peace, liberty and love. The Americans had built the ultimate war machine to bring peace. They created a machine to kill those that wanted to kill.
Once again, the irony was lost on the Americans.

Probably because they were all dead.
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Re: Short stories.

Postby thrasherdave on Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:06 pm

:lol: I love how you threw that last sentence in as a footnote
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Re: Short stories.

Postby MartinC on Sun Apr 03, 2011 9:53 am

Here's one I did a few years ago for a Uni assignment (I didn't get a very good mark for it... waaaaa!!!!)


You Look Different

Sarah was lonely. There was no other reason for her to be sitting there in the cafe, alone, waiting for him. She wasn't trying something exciting or new; this was the last option that she had at meeting someone. Well, she had met someone. Sort of. His name was Scott. He was 5 foot 10, he had brown eyes, he had a well paid job in advertising and his star sign was Virgo. She was a Pisces - it was the perfect match, after all, opposites attract. However, despite knowing so much about Scott, Sarah had never met the man face to face - until today, that was.

The reason being that Sarah had met Scott on the internet - a dating website. It was quite good, really. The website enabled her to filter her search to meet her requirements in a man specifically - no wonder Scott was such a perfect match. Scott was a good looking man too - especially considering he was in his early forties - quite a catch, Sarah thought. After all, she was getting on a bit now.

Sarah would often worry about her age and her looks. When the two of them first began talking over the internet, Scott would always maintain that 'looks weren't important to him'. She wasn't stupid, she knew what men really thought of her, but she wasn't going to let that ruin her chances this time, she'd planned for it. She had spent money on surgery - not lots, just little bits here and there - her nose, her lips, the wrinkles of her weathered face. It was by no means cheap, but surely money should be no object when it comes to true love?

Scott would be in for a surprise when he arrived.

She began stirring her cup of tea to the point where she irritated herself. She had not been on a date in years and was feeling all the nerves and emotions she'd hoped she had gotten over by her age. She felt like people were watching her every move. She stopped stirring, fully aware of herself. It wouldn't be long until he arrived, he was only a few minutes late.

When another five minutes passed on the clock on the wall, Sarah realised that she had drank almost three quarters of what had been in the cup. Was she looking for an excuse to leave before suffering the embarrassment of being 'stood up' any longer? She collected her purse and got up, moving towards the toilet. As she turned around, she felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around, hoping for him.

But what stood facing her was a fat, tired looking man - the man that had been sitting near the window sill. She was sure he had been watching her for quite some time.

"Can I help you?" she said.

The man seemed to be having as much trouble speaking as she did.

"Are you... Sarah? You look different."

Likewise, she thought.
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